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Monday, December 12, 2011

Final Assessment

Shakespeare Party!
The art group has been looking forward to this event. It was a wonderful opportunity both to see all of our physical art represented in one location and to receive feedback from a larger public. Before the event started, I played the song that I had written about Shakespeare's Hamlet on the piano to 'get in the mood', and was able to get feedback from a classmate! With regards to the art itself, it was gratifying to see people go up to the easel and point and make comments; it is motivating to continue to share Shakespeare via the websites that we have created: cnx, youtube, and deviant art. Also I enjoyed the comments that were made by one roommate of a classmate in the crowd that asked a question about how much feedback we had gotten from these websites already. I do admit that I did not engage others conversationally as well as I should have: I was worried about some issues at home and should have felt more social. But, we did engage people with Shakespeare on many levels, and I was indeed amazed-- outside our group the sharing was incredible too:


I loved how the performances gradually drew out progressively more impressed reactions from the audience, ending in the play and music video. It was fun to see how the skill of the actors, filmers, and music-video-ers left people floored. You could tell my their reactions that they weren't expecting to be amazed so much. I think my favorite moment was when Cadet Hess stood and we gave him an applause. To me it felt like Shakespeare was not just being shared, but being the means for connection generally among us. I started off the Q&A/sharing with my story of Claude the Homeless guy, and people seemed to enjoy that. Shakespeare became everybody's common ground there. Success!


In terms of our project itself, some of the process can be seen here, and some of the research our group did here and here.


Personal Assessment in the Learning objectives:
Gain Shakespeare Literacy
After reading all of the assigned plays start to finish, seeing two productions of Shakespeare, and being present every day of class to discuss Shakespeare, I am only starting to get a good feel for Shakespeare's voice. But I feel like I do have that start, which is motivating. I am beginning to understand why people like him so much: He allows us to approach ourselves in a different way that is good for reflection and introspection. I have reflected on the way I treat others, the way in which we might love better, etc. I think that the lesson plans that we created was also a good way for us to gain literacy (thanks for printing those, by the way!)


Analyze Shakespeare Critically 
This was one of the areas that were deficient last assessment, and so I spent extra time here. I enjoyed reading Shakespeare closely, a project which I had not yet undertaken. Looking at just one passage closely for a little over an hour made me appreciate the detail that goes into every aspect of the plays Shakespeare wrote. 


Another significant project that helped me engage creatively was to do research on what others were saying about Shakespeare: in the Spanish Lit context (it took some research to find, but it was possible!!!). I found some clues as to what Borges thought about Shakespeare in an interview, read a short story of his in Spanish about Shakespeare (La memoria de Shakespeare), and researched what other Hispanic Scholars were saying about all of this. This was one of the funnest blogs I've done. I got this idea from another research project I had done on what the Spanish scholars say about Shakespeare.


In a less involved project, I thought about and blogged similarities and differences between "King Lear" and another play: "La casa de Bernarda Alba".


Of course, the critical work that I did at the beginning of the semester (which was really more creative/ not as critical as I thought) was the translation: See here, and here, and here (where I got the idea). I did not focus as much on translations during the latter part of the class when we started our final projects: the other learning objective that I wanted more fully to fulfill was "Engage Shakespeare Creatively", on which I felt I should spend the majority of my effort (not having really done so yet).


Engage Shakespeare Creatively 
This I found very enlightening. It was new to take a short piece of text, think about the words carefully, and respond without words the way I felt about it. This required our group to form a new blog altogether.


I responded to Horatio's interpretation of the Ghost when he sees it, and juxtaposed that with Hamlet's reaction of what I thought when he Himself must have seen the Ghost, to when Hamlet (in a soliloquy) questions himself and his bravery, to the famous "to be or not to be" idea (of course), and both to Ophelia "divided" and to the Last scene where everything seems to fall apart. I responded furthermore to the theme of acting in the play, and illusions (see here and here), and finally to the overarching theme I found in the play of waiting and hesitation. When Hamlet refuses to kill the king (as he is praying), when he calls himself a coward, when he wonders if he should commit suicide or not, etc. All of this spoke to me as to what he felt, while waiting and hesitating so much. This I responded to with an organ and flute original composition, which by itself required between 15 - 20 hours (open here if previous link will not work).
 
Share Shakespeare Meaningfully 
Besides what I mentioned above about the actual gallery at the Shakespeare Party, I have worked on getting our curriculum up on cnx.org. I have not link yet since the curriculum still has not been cleared. Our group was involved, however, both in youtube and deviant art to get our project public.

I furthermore enjoyed the brief correspondence I had with Dr. Laura Campos from Spain, Sharing with Claude, of course, and sharing with my little brothers-in-law (the blog here reflects the preparation, I have not gotten the results up and running yet...)


And so, thus it is that Shakespeare and I are much better acquainted. Thanks, Dr. Burton, for a great semester.



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Tuesday, November 1, 2011

Self-Assessment

A. Learning Outcomes:

1. How have I gained Shakespeare Literacy?

Honest confession: when I started to read our first play together, Hamlet, I had to spend significant amounts of time in order to be able to understand simply what was going on. I started from scratch, not knowing what was going to happen, and trying to pick it all out. Since then, I have developed literacy in two ways: (1) utilize better tactics to understand Shakespeare: for the rest of the plays now, I use sites to get a background knowledge on the plot, and I understand the importance of using video renditions (see here too) and the plays themselves to get a better context and comparative analysis. The more times I have repeated this process (with The Winters Tale, Richard II, Love's Labour's Lost, and The Tempest). Doing all the reading for these plays and then bringing in outside productions has helped me learn how to come to understand Shakespeare. (2) Additionally, I am getting a feel for the language, and picking up a working vocabulary of what many of his words mean, like "Marry", "It booteth me not", "prithee", etc.

2. How have I analyzed Shakespeare critically?

I have enjoyed the most working on my Shakespeare translation project (see here (when I started) and here (for meter) as well) which also involves now a correspondence with a prestigious university in Spain. I have been comparing translations, commenting on the style and effectiveness, and seeing the pros and cons of each style of translation.

3. How have I engaged Shakespeare creatively?

This one is a blast, but I should have done it more. I started off ambitiously composing a song for one of Laertes' soliloquies, but have not finished that. The project that I most enjoyed was envisioning my own staging of the Tempest.

4. How have I shared Shakespeare meaningfully?

Although I was hesitant at first, I had such a rewarding time with this. There was a time I started up a conversation about Loves Labour's Lost with a co-worker at the MTC, talking about all the plays with my wife and family, and how it relates to present challenges I face, etc. The coolest ones have been teaching Richard II to my 3 young brother in laws (blog pending), and conversing with a homeless gentleman. Both these past two have surprised me how much people know and understand the old Bard.

Self-directed Learning

I have been take quite a bit off guard, to be honest, by the way I have started to take control of my Shakespeare learning. Starting with Love's Labour's Lost, I have been noticing in all the protagonists of the plays character traits that are not favorable in them that I also possess. This has been both startling and humbling as I notice my own character flaws and try to remedy them. I have chosen not to blog about these, given the sensitive nature that they are to me, but have served as the impetus to get conversations going with my wife and with myself about how things are going. Strange to say, perhaps, but, it seemed like Shakespeare knew the fallacies of humankind so well that he could show me where I falter. One example is here.

Collaborative and Social Learning

In the group that I am working with, all of the students have contributed about equally with their comments. I have tried to comment on two or more a day, and it seems like most all of the other students did the same, Especially Averrill. I enjoyed a comment thread with Martina, which got me thinking. All of the students have fomented discussion in small ways.

Working with the groups has given me more motivation to look for specific criticism when reading, because I know that it is coming up. I will look at possible venues in my mind, comparisons to other works, and the overarching meaning or theme so I don't sound like an idiot when we get discussing. It could be improved, perhaps, if we were to talk as a group what we want to discuss next time so we can delve deeper when we do.

The blogging and commenting in class has helped me contribute and get into the mindset of my group. Outside of class, I have really enjoyed the correspondence I have set up with Spain. When I received the reply Sunday morning, I was ecstatic. With my dad and brothers I have also been talking, and they have engaged my ideas too. Their comments have also caused reflection.

Looking Ahead

I would like to develop a more creative approach to Shakespeare. I feel like I have tried always to be academic, and yet have probably been or sounded deficient there as well. I want to do something artsy for the final... maybe finish that song. I enjoyed thinking about that idea today that we could create a proposal for our own play. I would like to take charge of the music, were that the case.





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